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[VOON] one of my goals

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Hi,everyone!
My speech topic is goals. I have some goals and
today I speak one of them : becoming a clever foreign exchange trader.

What do you think when you hear the words something like trade and investment?
I know some people say, ‘’ Trading is gambling’’. Is it true? I don’t think so.

I started foreign exchange trading 4years ago. At first I thought trading was easy and I could make much money easily. So I imagined it was a dream method such as to make 10million yen by using 50thousand yen. Yes, it certainly is gambling.
I made a lot of mistakes the beginners do and lost much money. Then I noticed that my thinking was wrong and I could be a real trader if I acquire correct knowledge. At the same time I met some individual investors. They taught me about both trading methods and importance of mental balance. Now I know it is a big difference between trading and gambling.
If I am asked how to succeed in trading, I will tell you not to think about wining. This is one thing I learned from one of great traders I respect. She always says ‘’you should not think about losing big, and stay longer in market. To that end it is essential to control desire and fear .You know, the market price swings heavily. In that sever environment, only people who can stay cool and follow the rules can become a succeeded investor.
My teacher taught me trading makes people happy. She donated a part of profits of trading. It’s often said ''Money is vulgar'', But I don’t agree with that. I think it brings in freedom and happiness. It is wonderful thought isn’t it?

That is why becoming a clever trader is one of my goals.
Its profits bring happiness not only for me but also for less fortunate people.
I continue studying and enjoy it to make my dream come true.
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Let me talk about my goals.
I have my own goals, and today I share with you one of them; I want to be a clever and philanthropic foreign exchange trader.

What do you think of when you hear the words something like trade and investment?
A part of you may say, ‘’ Trader is a gambler.’’ Is it true? I don’t think so.

I came into foreign exchange trading four years ago. At first, I thought that business was easy and I could make a quick buck. It seemed to me a dream-making method to make 10 million yen out of 50 thousand yen overnight. But, it was risky gambling, indeed. I made a lot of rookie-mistakes and threw away much money. Then, I noticed that I was wrong and I had to study the business more to be a good trader. Meanwhile, I came across some amateur investors like me. They were kind enough to share with me vital advice on both practical methods and mental factors to be a successful trader. Now, I was brought to understand there is a big difference between clever trading and fearless gambling.

If I am asked how to succeed in money game, I will tell you not to stick to wining the game. This is a lesson learned from one of the great traders I respect. She always says, "you should not imagine yourself losing a lot, and stay long and steadily in market.” To that end, it is essential to balance boldness against wariness in ourselves. You know, the market prices are going up and down pretty fast. In that upheaval, only those who are able to obey the rules(laws?) and stay cool in judgments of the situation around can become a successful investor.

Many people believe money game is a dirty affair in which humans are cheating on each other. Certainly, some gamers are greedy and arrogant, yet I know a great investor I pay respects a lot, who enjoys money game well and knows how to commit herself to society. “Money circulates in the world”, a Japanese proverb says. She has shared the profits with society, making donations to poor countries for example. She is my role model and I really wish to follow suite. Respectable investors are sure to know how and where they should spend their gains for good purposes.

For these reasons, I would like to be a clever, well motivated humane trader in the foreign currency market. To make it happen, I will continue to lean the trading skills as hard as ever.
2009/09/08(火) 15:09 | URL | サラリーマン英語学習者 #-[ 編集]
yet I know a great investor I pay respects a lot

yet I know a great investor I pay respects a lot to に訂正。
2009/09/08(火) 15:18 | URL | サラリーマン英語学習者 #-[ 編集]
サラリーマン英語学習者さんへ
手直しありがとうございました。

気になっていた導入部分、すっきりしました。
特に5パラグラフ目が、カッコイイです!
英語のスピーチらしくない雰囲気がいっそうされて、とても大人の雰囲気がただようスピーチに
なったと思います。

語彙力がないペンギンは、このスピーチを読むのに辞書が必要でした…。
中学レベルの単語すら使いこなせてない状況ですが、philanthropicやwarinessなどなどの
単語もいつか使いこなしたいので、今後もアウトプットがんばります。

手直ししていただいたスピーチで、1時間ほど勉強させていただきました。
すばらしいコメントありがとうございます。
ぜひとも、英語ブログのほうも何か気づいた点、コメントくださいませ。



2009/09/09(水) 01:20 | URL | ペンギン太郎 #-[ 編集]
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